David, your pragmatism seems to start at the middle. Im curious about what leads you to think these books are about a real or true man? I think you should get into what lead you to think this also. you do a pretty good job picking up the story from where you did though.

other than that it reads well except somewhere in the first few pages was a mention of venomous and venomously referring to the same thing. (both words in the same sentence) seemed a little over emphatic.

FWIW anyway..


thanks